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Zaveski
02-28-2009, 03:09 PM
The thousand breaths pass me
Inherited changes walk along a harsh road
Evolution ranging of what's next
The thousand years we primarily look at may not reveal

Running across the empty street
Viewing at what's ahead
We appeal our mistake to ever go
Yet only the outcome seems aloof

Catch it, keep the base
Achieve it now, and put it aside
When it is gone, you cannot regain trust
Although there is a new beginning

You act towards this new chance
Wanting every little thing to stay equivalent
Changing yourself to be like everyone who you set against

The one learns the message has been put out
And therefore has to start his will all over
So you begin
So you start

Colin
02-28-2009, 04:02 PM
And therefor has to start his will all over


Therefore*

10/10 - The overall poem is really nice Zaven, I like this one.

canyousai15
02-28-2009, 04:05 PM
You are a total b'itch a'ss f'aggot mofo slut.

not def n00b
02-28-2009, 05:03 PM
lol :D Fast ban :D