World at War Poem

[Colin]

World at War Poem

The fear in the eyes,
As times are fought hard.
Nothing will replenish them,
the hurt remain scared.

The invasion had subsided,
the counterattack had began.
Most tensions are masked,
the "can't" becomes a "can".

Establishment was forced,
formal relationships tossed aside.
The segregation of the best,
most impoverished had already died.

Final hope was sounded out,
both sides pushed harder than ever.
Rebellion exterminated communist rule,
question to repel: the answer was never.


Just a little poem that I tried to tie in with my World War III story that is currently under construction. Tell me what you think.

[Chris]

I love it, Colin. Very nice use of vocabulary. It's also very touching and inspiring. 10/10.

[Colin]

I love it, Colin. Very nice use of vocabulary. It's also very touching and inspiring. 10/10.

Thank you, took me only ten minutes total.

[Chris]

Only ten minutes? Wow.

[AquaFear09]

Colin...Colin...Colin.

You never fail to dissapoint me.

10/10 Bravo

[Every1die4]

Heh. You never cease to amaze me Colin. If you keep this up, you'll be the Master Literary Artist (behind Benz) in no time! ;)

Your vocabulary is enhanced. That's a good thing. :)

[bronze axe]

10/10, i love the way you use the words, and the title, what grade are you in, and do you get an A+ in language arts?

[Colin]

Heh. You never cease to amaze me Colin. If you keep this up, you'll be the Master Literary Artist (behind Benz) in no time! ;)

Your vocabulary is enhanced. That's a good thing. :)

I do not know about that, but thank you :)