AquaFear09
03-08-2009, 01:50 PM
G.B.H
Its like i never cried before
i said i'd never hurt you i swore.
The funeral was the worst day of my life;
You here 'bout the muderers with a knife.
It was just a meere car ride;
I didn't know you were pregnant with my child.
After we fliped and the car wheeles faced up.
I kept on shouting for you to shut up.
You wouldnt.
You kept screeming 'Help Help'
No-one came
i lost my patience and slammed you into the door frame.
I realised what i had just done;
Hoping some-one would come and shoot me with a sub-machine gun.
Im sorry rach.
I should be locked up for G.B.H
yes the third stanza is differant from the rest.
This is the third part to the DEATH series. The series reflect on how people miss lost ones and look back how they died. Part one is here (http://dodian.com/forums/showthread.php?t=52654) and part two is here (http://dodian.com/forums/showthread.php?t=52454)
post your comments on them.
Its like i never cried before
i said i'd never hurt you i swore.
The funeral was the worst day of my life;
You here 'bout the muderers with a knife.
It was just a meere car ride;
I didn't know you were pregnant with my child.
After we fliped and the car wheeles faced up.
I kept on shouting for you to shut up.
You wouldnt.
You kept screeming 'Help Help'
No-one came
i lost my patience and slammed you into the door frame.
I realised what i had just done;
Hoping some-one would come and shoot me with a sub-machine gun.
Im sorry rach.
I should be locked up for G.B.H
yes the third stanza is differant from the rest.
This is the third part to the DEATH series. The series reflect on how people miss lost ones and look back how they died. Part one is here (http://dodian.com/forums/showthread.php?t=52654) and part two is here (http://dodian.com/forums/showthread.php?t=52454)
post your comments on them.