A Simple Rose

[Xzite]

A simple rose right over there,
It seems just as no one cares,
Beside a tree, a tree of pears,
People walk right on by,
That beautiful rose wants to die,
No one cares, but that's a lie,
But one day the rose will die.

The day has come, that rose had died,
People looked, but passed right by,
The rose was hope, but hope was gone,
Through out the dawn that rose is there,
But no one just seems to have a care,
For if that one person just dared,
To show that rose a little care.

[Star Limited]

Omg Dude Sweeeet Poems!!!

Cant wait to do this :D

[Xzite]

Thank you mate,
Rate it please.

[h2ker]

Xzite i no we have Had our Bad time's

But 10/10 Nice Work Man :D Il Like 2 Be Freinds if thats ok ?

[Xzite]

Thank you H2ker,
Of course ill be your friend.

[Colin]

9/10 - Eceinte rhyming sensation in this poem. The only thing I would challenge you to do is to expand on your vocabulary, I will be watching you.

[TOXiiCz]

Now I quite like this one,
You have displayed withing this poem a great sense of rhyme, without losing the true meaning to the poem, getting better 7/10.
Expand your vocabulary, maybe in some spare time, think of some words you would commonly use and expand on them either using a thesaurus or simply by asking...

[Xzite]

Thank you.

[h2ker]

Thank you.


Not Long til ur Artist :D
Xzite = Leet :D:yes:

[Sherpa2Chris]

Awesome poem! Poor rose. :'( Give the rose some love, brotha! :yes:

[Asian]

What are you getting at in this poem? What's the point of it?