Silent Beat

[Star Limited]

I hear a knock,
at 9 o clock,
go to check,
and crack my neck.

Then a beat,
starts to repeat,
Silently Clear,
i started to fear.

Looked A far,
and dropped my jar,
had to clean,
or i might go green.

Locked the door,
because it started to pour,
went upstairs,
to say my prayers.


:angel:

[Xzite]

I lol'd at this haha,
I enjoyed reading this 8/10,
keep it up mate.

[Star Limited]

Thanks your added to my l33t list of awsome writers! :D

[h2ker]

Nice im gunna give this a Try
Yu could probs Inprove

[Max]

lol at the first stanza.

[Star Limited]

Lol Thanks for all Comments :D

[not def n00b]

not bad :D 8/10

[AquaFear09]

not bad at all.