AquaFear09
03-08-2009, 05:58 PM
this is my work in progress:
As you went home that night
You went through the door flicked on the light.
I heard you scream.
I rushed to the scene and saw what seemed,
Blood dripping down your cheek.
I phoned 999 asked for help.
Heard an almighty whelp.
I saw blood pumping out of your mouth.
The paramedics came and took you away.
I never saw you after that day.
this is it so far ill finish it tomorrow please post things i can add
As you went home that night
You went through the door flicked on the light.
I heard you scream.
I rushed to the scene and saw what seemed,
Blood dripping down your cheek.
I phoned 999 asked for help.
Heard an almighty whelp.
I saw blood pumping out of your mouth.
The paramedics came and took you away.
I never saw you after that day.
this is it so far ill finish it tomorrow please post things i can add