When
03-19-2009, 11:36 AM
Original Piece
It’s Raining
It's raining; it's pouring.
The old man is snoring.
He bumped his head and went to bed
And couldn't get up in the morning.
An interpretation substituting the word “rain” with “reign” and continuing from there.
It’s Reigning REMIX
Its reigning, it’s controlling.
The unkempt dictator is roaring.
He failed to rule and so he sleeps and drools
And he was no longer ruling the next morning.
So the second one is meant to be a variation to the original. Just started thinking of poems recently and hopefully you'll see more eventually. Comments to help make it better would be nice. -Thanks
It’s Raining
It's raining; it's pouring.
The old man is snoring.
He bumped his head and went to bed
And couldn't get up in the morning.
An interpretation substituting the word “rain” with “reign” and continuing from there.
It’s Reigning REMIX
Its reigning, it’s controlling.
The unkempt dictator is roaring.
He failed to rule and so he sleeps and drools
And he was no longer ruling the next morning.
So the second one is meant to be a variation to the original. Just started thinking of poems recently and hopefully you'll see more eventually. Comments to help make it better would be nice. -Thanks