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k2roliino
03-30-2009, 12:15 PM
Okay, so I don't have to go to school this week, I got alot of ideas of making a story.

Main characters will be:
meritorious explorer and scientist professor Bag,
arctic fruit investigator Ylo Sink,
anthropologist Jevgeni "an Ant"
army's doctor Harald New.

What's the story about?

professor Bag, arctic fruit investigator Ylo Sink, anthropologist Jevgeni "an Ant" and army's doctor Harald New are going to take an extrahazardous expedition trip to countryside.. insolent city guys aim is to explore forests, fields, villages, in a word all those places, what form countryside people's element. Explores trying to find an answer, where do countryside people get food, when in forests and in fields doesnt have canteens and restaurants, likewisely they are interested in, why does the air in countryside is different than in the city?
etc, etc, I think it'd be pretty funny ( in my head lol )

Any support? Should I write a story about it? :D

~Karoliina.

Creek str
03-30-2009, 12:22 PM
Karo you know i support you :) make it a story it would be great.

-Runar

Cariz
03-30-2009, 12:23 PM
Ensure a clear introduction.

Maybe give us a brief blurb to give us more detail on what will be happening.
At the moment I an unclear on what the characters aim is, what problems there may be and their background.

Provide this and we (and I) will have a clearer understanding on where to progress.

PureSkiller
03-30-2009, 12:23 PM
Haha, seems to become a nice story . (':

Support Karro . <3

k2roliino
03-30-2009, 12:46 PM
Ensure a clear introduction.

Maybe give us a brief blurb to give us more detail on what will be happening.
At the moment I an unclear on what the characters aim is, what problems there may be and their background.

Provide this and we (and I) will have a clearer understanding on where to progress.

Wait and see, :)

KxWarrior
03-31-2009, 07:49 AM
seems like it's a pretty sweet story :P. I'll be waiting to see what becomes of it. Good Luck. :] (My own story has taken a drawback)