dodian peom

[xensmith]

DODIAN

dodian is a private server.

its not runescape.

its not anything.

its it's own server.

its it's own pking.

its own source.

its own kind of thing.

its a place filled with staff and players.

players from places all over the world to play....

DODIAN.

[briese]

You might want to try graphics instead.

[Surfacing]

Umm.. Atleast you tried. Maybe put abit more thought into you're next poem if you choose to do another one.

~Mitch.

[K and O]

its not anything.


Oh, it's not anything?

[TehSeckz]

DODIAN

dodian is a private server.

its not runescape.

its not anything.

its it's own server.

its it's own pking.

its own source.

its own kind of thing.

its a place filled with staff and players.

players from places all over the world to play....

DODIAN.

That was horrible...
Sorry, but it was.

[Respected]

Umm, maybe you can inhance your vocabulary with stronger words?

[Mutilate]

DODIAN

dodian is a private server.

its not runescape.

its not anything.

its it's own server.

its it's own pking.

its own source.

its own kind of thing.

its a place filled with staff and players.

players from places all over the world to play....

DODIAN.



that was bad....

lemme try it again for you.

DODIAN

An adventure similar to one
But like none

DODIAN


there we goes....
so its only two lines

but....its better than that...

[Qrat]

not very good poem. but yeh, okay

[PureSkiller]

Bad .

Put more effort in your next one .

[XX aelita XX]

In the name of poetry, I classify this 0/10.

[ynnaD]

You should express your feelings in a good poem not on a computer-game based.