No title

[xensmith]

walk slowly to the right
fell england to have sunny summer
wall singing
wolf is moving slowly

be a doctor if i see a bear

somebody nice
lookes at you.

please replay back with a good title and what you think...

[Elique Zaven]

Title - "This makes no sense at all."

[Respected]

Umm, Okay?
There absolutely is no flow.
This is just a buch of random stuff.
The grammer is aweful.
The title should be random.

[soo owned]

I lol'd hard. Your grammar is extremely bad. This poem, or whatever it is, makes no sense what so ever. Put more thought.

1/10

~Aelita~Owned

EDIT:



The grammer is aweful.




You cant talk.


~Aelita~Owned