The Fallen - Love, and sin.

[Ubiquitous]

I scream from the loss
I ask someone from above
Why did you take her?
Why did you take my one true love?

I cry, I can not handle this anymore.
I pause and think, then pickup the knife
I wake up cold, screaming in pain
I can not take it anymore, I end my strife.

The cold, the darkness, the fall
It is too late for me
I can not be saved from my hell
I will die, just let me be.

It is over now, I am back with her
"Merlin, I missed you, oh Merlin"
She barely whispers to me
And now I am one of The Fallen.

My poem is about an angel, Merlin, who is in love with another angel. This angel he is in love with becomes one of the Fallen. The Fallen are a group of angels who have turned to hell. Merlin asks god why he took her from him. Eventually he can not take it anymore and kills himself. This results in him becoming a Fallen. My poem shows what one will truly do for love. A person will do anything to be with their love. Rate, or hate I don not care.

I posted this on another account and the account was banned. I am now posting this again on my new account.

[Colin]

This seems like a speech too. I like reading your poems. Just add a little touch of vocabulary here and there to spice it up a little :)

[Melanson]

http://dodian.com/forums/showthread.php?t=57069


This poem was already posted.

[Ubiquitous]

Melanson, I am Literary. I posted them again on this account so the credit can go to this account. If you read my entire post you would see
I posted this on another account and the account was banned. I am now posting this again on my new account.
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[XX aelita XX]

It's the same noob Melanson.

[Ubiquitous]

Okay, no more flaming please? Aelita, who did you call a noob?