You loved me?

[FireBlade]

You ended it before it started.
We were only a while but it lasted.

You lied.
I cried.

I loved.
You felt bad.

I lay here wondering why?
But all I can do is let out a sigh.

We fought.
But I sought.

You said I was a mistake.
When you should drown in a lake...

I'll keep this going I just need another fight with my Ex and it will be updated... Give me a break it's my first poem...

[OwnagE1337]

pretty good but only 2 words each sentences.

it could be like :


"You really loved me ?
Or its just joke, you hated me?"


an example.

8/10

[Risible]

Eh, Ex-es can be tough. To get her over the fight, take her to a movie, put your arm around her, and just watch the movie together. Im sure she will just act as if it was a normal night of hanging out, then she'll get over your fight. :) Good poem to! It was a little sketchy at the start, but you picked it up. NICE! 7/10.

[FireBlade]

Eh, Ex-es can be tough. To get her over the fight, take her to a movie, put your arm around her, and just watch the movie together. Im sure she will just act as if it was a normal night of hanging out, then she'll get over your fight. :) Good poem to! It was a little sketchy at the start, but you picked it up. NICE! 7/10.
Well I wrote this to kinda "Vent" I was just pissed off when I went out with her for two days then dumped me then a month later we went out for two months and dumps me and tells me that she felt "Sorry" for me. And that it was the only reason she went out with me...

[OwnagE1337]

maybe some friends of her gave her money for do it, and they would just laugh of you? :P anyways it was bad done, dont go out with her more, get over her, find another 1 that wouldnt dump you every1 month or soo.

[shadow123]

nice but a bit small?

[FireBlade]

nice but a bit small?
-Coughs- Work in progress forum. -Coughs- Did you even read the bottom?

[Risible]

Well I wrote this to kinda "Vent" I was just pissed off when I went out with her for two days then dumped me then a month later we went out for two months and dumps me and tells me that she felt "Sorry" for me. And that it was the only reason she went out with me... You should have told her the only reason you went out with her is because you felt bad for her. Lol

[Kreepy]

Dude i dont care whats wrong with it 10/10 i love it. Keep it going. Plus everyone get off his back everyone fights. *cough* Risible. *cough* And some people are right, maybe she is using you or has a bet or something..