Sometimes...

[dragosh]

author : dragosh alias doomclip
blog : http://doomclip.blogspot.com/

---en---
Sometimes

Sometimes I stay and think
How beautiful you are
I want everyday to tell you
How much I love you.

Sometimes when I am mad
I think about you
It is weird
I have love tears.

Sometimes when I woke up
From a nightmare
You light my path
With your spirit so great.

Sometimes...


---fr---
Parfois

Parfois j'arrete et je pense
Que belle tu est
Je veux dire a toi
Comme je t'aime

Parfois quand je suis fache
Je pense a toi
Est etrange
J'ai larme d'amour.

Parfois quand je me reveille
Du cauchemar
Tu illuminer mon route
Avec ton esprit.

Parfois...

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[briese]

I enjoyed it. The vocabulary was simple, but it fit. This goes to show everyone that you don't have to use big thesaurus words or a twisted and complicated idea to write good poetry. I also thought it was cool that you posted the french translation.