aphrodite
04-16-2009, 10:29 PM
This one took about 45 minutes to make it all make sense.
She wakes every morning with a smile
on her face.
She felt his love in her sleep.
Dreamed of his embrace.
Although she's never met his body.
His heart she does feel.
Anytime she has loved before.
Has never felt so real.
There is no explanation for it.
Not one has she yet found.
But oh my god the feeling she gets when
he is around.
Although it may end tomorrow.
The memory will not fade.
For in her heart a life long friend.
She feels that she has made.
She hopes it lasts forever.
She prays that they do meet.
She dreams of the day her love.
sweeps her off her feet.
rate/hate tell me what to fix/ improve. This is my second time posting a poem.
She wakes every morning with a smile
on her face.
She felt his love in her sleep.
Dreamed of his embrace.
Although she's never met his body.
His heart she does feel.
Anytime she has loved before.
Has never felt so real.
There is no explanation for it.
Not one has she yet found.
But oh my god the feeling she gets when
he is around.
Although it may end tomorrow.
The memory will not fade.
For in her heart a life long friend.
She feels that she has made.
She hopes it lasts forever.
She prays that they do meet.
She dreams of the day her love.
sweeps her off her feet.
rate/hate tell me what to fix/ improve. This is my second time posting a poem.