Emo poem.

[Kreepy]

My friend Kyle and me wrote this for no reason, i felt like putting this on the submissions to see what you guys think.



Where do we stand in this unforgiving world?
WE STAND ALONE IN THIS LAND OF SORROW. DO WE EVEN NEED TO BE HERE?
There is only death and sorrow. Our only salvation is the bitter end of death we must face.
Everyday I cut deeper and deeper to my world I crave.
I don't know what stops me from giving myself that last slice. Is it the pain....no...it's the pleasure.
The bitter sweet taste of decadence as my soul slips away under the haze of blood. I can't find a more righteous purpose for existing.


There. Plz i mean PLZ no flames..

[Jesse]

He should /suicide.

[Kreepy]

heh just did it out of no where. i only did one line realy, "The bitter sweet taste of decadence as my soul slips away under the haze of blood." =P

[The Jigsaw]

:devil: Pain is only pleasure when one is watching :devil:

[Nottz]

heh just did it out of no where. i only did one line realy, "The bitter sweet taste of decadence as my soul slips away under the haze of blood." =P

Your friend just suicided out of no where?

[Moist]

wow thats crazy

[Sherpa2Chris]

You idiots and your emo "poems". IF your going to write emo poetry, WRITE IT CORRECTLY. All of your poems are either about losing love, some girl you want but can never be with, or some depressing mood. That is not what emo is all about. Emo short for "Emotional" is a way of expressing something whether it be great achievements or low times...but mostly, all I see is low times and how *most* (exceptions exist, not many though) of you people write your poems is absolutely degrading. You should be ashamed of yourselves for not looking over what you wrote more than 10 times and checking for inconsistencies within your use of grammar and the way you write. I know most of you are "young" but guess what, just because your young, doesn't give you the right to come into this section and write "lulz dis poum bout how dis grl i liek hr n den i fnd out she no liek me so wrotted dis" pieces of ****. I'm not flaming. I'm quoting.

[Kreepy]

Your friend just suicided out of no where?

He has his moments.

[Cariz]

This is not enjoyable to read.

[Italy68]

I'm not flaming. I'm quoting.
Honestly my first thought when I read that poem was, "I will quote Wiz's post."

[Ubiquitous]

Sorry I do not like your emotional poem.

[Kreepy]

Thank you could have just said something better than that. I never say anything negitive to you.

[Ubiquitous]

I did not flame, if you do not like negative feedback do not post things. I stated the truth, just because you do not like it does not make it wrong.