Satire

[Kevin]

Just wrote this for my Contemp Lit class, only took like 3 minutes lol.

I'm the kid who does the work,
The snobby stuck up mate.
They're the ones who get the credit,
And I get the appreciHate.

Tell meh whatchu think.

[f4ll3n d0wn]

i liked it but it was a little poorly written, and very nice tho for 3 minutes. I really didnt like the appreciHATE part. that didnt go well with it but i give u 6/10:yes:

[Nottz]

Clever, clever indeed. This is the type of literary flavor that we don't see much of around here. AppreciHate is an interesting statement. Good work, This short but sweet poem had some small rhythm issues, but your unique little touch at the end put it at a great poem level. Great work, show them how it's done with more of these.

8.5/10