The future comes...

[wampis ltu]

Youth love song
And it sounds like the song.
To live the life
Full of dreams.

Lives - in our hands!
Life - the heart of
Full vision to resist,
The future comes ...

Around - the tracks of roads
Environment - ring ring ...
Is your way of happiness,
Youth, found?

All roads - to the happiness
In the heart - a young
Be heard in the city and the countryside,
Funny song

Life - in our hands!
Life - the heart of
Full vision to resist,
The future comes ...


Comment: I wrote this, to trying to get a literary artist's title.

[wampis ltu]

Sorry for my bad english, because i am lithuanian..

[Colin]

You really need to work on your flow, you really didn't establish one at all. If you're trying to receive Literary Artist you have some work to do.

Expand your vocabulary, try not to be so repetitive.

[XX aelita XX]

I didn't feel a flow at all. Expand your vocabulary. If you're going for literary artist, I suggest you look over some others works and inherit some styles.