hot pink
05-19-2009, 06:36 PM
Hi everyone this is my story so far i hope you like it
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James is a merchant he is following his following his fathers path, his dad owned the biggest merchanting company in the world. James is 15 and doesn't go to school. But he is still really smart in technology and computers. He was so eager to find his fathers killer. He asked his body guard Butler. He was a tall muscled man with weapons covering his body his was apart of the B.A.P(Bodyguard’s association of Patterton)James asked if he knew anything about it, He explained the last time he saw James’s father, it was at a bar. He had a meeting with a tall stubborn man with a joker mask covering his face. James’s father offered him a device to see in the future. James’s father valued it at 6 million dollars. Butler mentioned that his name was Peter Hauler. Peter screamed “lock and load boys!” James’s father got shot straight through his chest. Butler got shot in his left leg. He knew James’s father wouldn’t survive so he ran as fast as he could back to James’s father’s house trying to stay immune to the pain of his leg. As soon as he got home strapped it up and took a couple of pain killers. In about 2 minutes time the pain had gone but he had to do something about it he drove to the hospital to get them to have a look at his leg. It was fine but he would be scared for life. Butler showed James the scar it was a small circular shape. James had heard about Peter Hauler in the Merchant Magazine. He was getting suspicious getting a new car every week the same style but just brand new. He was spotted with Amanda Keller she was involved in the drug smuggling to Bali she got out of juvenile prison 6 months ago. Something weird was going on. He thought he could maybe find out what he was up to and get him to have the death penalty. In the he read it explained that he had been in prison 7 times and this is the last time if he screws up his gone. They went to the airport the place where he was last seen he was coming once every week at 5 PM sharp maybe James and butler could catch him. It was 3:00 PM and it was 1 and a half hours away. Butler jumped in the car and called James it was a big black van with lots of radars and strange devices in it, James thought they would never make it. About 10 minutes from home James changed his mind. Butler was going about 20 kilometers faster then the speed limit he didn’t care at all. About 10 minutes away from the airport they had caught the time. Butler slowed down to the normal speed limit. They saw a red Toyota Camary just like the one Peter Hauler had only newer. They tried catch it they where right behind it followed it and finally got to the airport. Peter Hauler walked off into the airport reception room James quickly jumped out of the car followed by Butler they ran straight for the door handle it was locked Butler swore and jumped punched the car leaving a dint in there they looked through the heavy black tint, Butler thought it was illegal to have a tint that dark. Butler ran into his van and got his night vision goggles. “Perfect” He whispered sarcastically. He could only see a folded piece of paper it look like a receipt. He could see the company name, Freeman Metal. They both spotted Peter Hauler coming back from the airport reception room. They quickly put a small tracking device on his car. They crawled through the back of the car so they couldn’t get spotted. Butler sat in the seat and started driving back. It was a quiet trip home they where both thinking what he would be doing buying from a metal company. As soon as they got home James took a long deep breath and walked to his laptop. He was researching Peter Hauler, Butler was looking where the car was going. “His flying to a place called Frestania” Butler exclaimed. James was researching Frestania. “It’s in Ailartsua” screamed James. He got a little bit of information. All about the taxes, the taxes are only 5%.James knew that he was up for tax fraud, but not enough to get the death penalty. It would have to be something big in money and big in profit. Butler yelled “The car just got 25 kilos heavier”. He was still staring at his big screen showing heaps of details about it. It even shows the age, that’s how hi-tech the B.A.P are. James thought he was smuggling whatever he had in his car. He told Butler everything he knew.
James was researching more about Amanda Keller. He found out that she has been missing in for 2 months. Butler shouted “I know gold”! He sprinted over from his van and told James to look up airport times. They where leaving in a day. James was excited.
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James is a merchant he is following his following his fathers path, his dad owned the biggest merchanting company in the world. James is 15 and doesn't go to school. But he is still really smart in technology and computers. He was so eager to find his fathers killer. He asked his body guard Butler. He was a tall muscled man with weapons covering his body his was apart of the B.A.P(Bodyguard’s association of Patterton)James asked if he knew anything about it, He explained the last time he saw James’s father, it was at a bar. He had a meeting with a tall stubborn man with a joker mask covering his face. James’s father offered him a device to see in the future. James’s father valued it at 6 million dollars. Butler mentioned that his name was Peter Hauler. Peter screamed “lock and load boys!” James’s father got shot straight through his chest. Butler got shot in his left leg. He knew James’s father wouldn’t survive so he ran as fast as he could back to James’s father’s house trying to stay immune to the pain of his leg. As soon as he got home strapped it up and took a couple of pain killers. In about 2 minutes time the pain had gone but he had to do something about it he drove to the hospital to get them to have a look at his leg. It was fine but he would be scared for life. Butler showed James the scar it was a small circular shape. James had heard about Peter Hauler in the Merchant Magazine. He was getting suspicious getting a new car every week the same style but just brand new. He was spotted with Amanda Keller she was involved in the drug smuggling to Bali she got out of juvenile prison 6 months ago. Something weird was going on. He thought he could maybe find out what he was up to and get him to have the death penalty. In the he read it explained that he had been in prison 7 times and this is the last time if he screws up his gone. They went to the airport the place where he was last seen he was coming once every week at 5 PM sharp maybe James and butler could catch him. It was 3:00 PM and it was 1 and a half hours away. Butler jumped in the car and called James it was a big black van with lots of radars and strange devices in it, James thought they would never make it. About 10 minutes from home James changed his mind. Butler was going about 20 kilometers faster then the speed limit he didn’t care at all. About 10 minutes away from the airport they had caught the time. Butler slowed down to the normal speed limit. They saw a red Toyota Camary just like the one Peter Hauler had only newer. They tried catch it they where right behind it followed it and finally got to the airport. Peter Hauler walked off into the airport reception room James quickly jumped out of the car followed by Butler they ran straight for the door handle it was locked Butler swore and jumped punched the car leaving a dint in there they looked through the heavy black tint, Butler thought it was illegal to have a tint that dark. Butler ran into his van and got his night vision goggles. “Perfect” He whispered sarcastically. He could only see a folded piece of paper it look like a receipt. He could see the company name, Freeman Metal. They both spotted Peter Hauler coming back from the airport reception room. They quickly put a small tracking device on his car. They crawled through the back of the car so they couldn’t get spotted. Butler sat in the seat and started driving back. It was a quiet trip home they where both thinking what he would be doing buying from a metal company. As soon as they got home James took a long deep breath and walked to his laptop. He was researching Peter Hauler, Butler was looking where the car was going. “His flying to a place called Frestania” Butler exclaimed. James was researching Frestania. “It’s in Ailartsua” screamed James. He got a little bit of information. All about the taxes, the taxes are only 5%.James knew that he was up for tax fraud, but not enough to get the death penalty. It would have to be something big in money and big in profit. Butler yelled “The car just got 25 kilos heavier”. He was still staring at his big screen showing heaps of details about it. It even shows the age, that’s how hi-tech the B.A.P are. James thought he was smuggling whatever he had in his car. He told Butler everything he knew.
James was researching more about Amanda Keller. He found out that she has been missing in for 2 months. Butler shouted “I know gold”! He sprinted over from his van and told James to look up airport times. They where leaving in a day. James was excited.