f4ll3n d0wn
05-19-2009, 06:32 PM
I recently started this poem, and I just want to know what you all think about it, so rate or hate.
An unstirred grave.
A person he couldn't save.
From the moment that he grabbed the wheel,
he had agreed to the Reaper's deal.
He said," Everything would be ok",
as drunk as he could be.
A tale that goes like this,
never ends happily.
He made a giant mistake,
this I was sure.
Bad things happen,
to even those who seem pure.
I recently started this poem, and I just want to know what you all think about it, so rate or hate.:yes:
An unstirred grave.
A person he couldn't save.
From the moment that he grabbed the wheel,
he had agreed to the Reaper's deal.
He said," Everything would be ok",
as drunk as he could be.
A tale that goes like this,
never ends happily.
He made a giant mistake,
this I was sure.
Bad things happen,
to even those who seem pure.
I recently started this poem, and I just want to know what you all think about it, so rate or hate.:yes: