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XX aelita XX
05-20-2009, 08:26 AM
It's just lyrics. First try. Don't go so hard on me!
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I'm alone in the dark.
Alone by myself, waiting for you to come.
You're hiding something from me, away from my heart.
And I can't take it anymore...

Maybe I can see the truth.
Maybe I can search, or find and seek out to recieve.
But the secret for now, will just have to lay within me.
Away in my broken heart..

You broke me once, maybe twice.
The secret inside is a big lie,
You said you'd love me but you lied.
My trust for you now must divide...

Maybe I can see the truth.
Maybe I can search, or find and seek out to recieve.
But the secret for now, will just have to lay within me.
Away in my broken heart..

Why don't you go away, step away?
Leave me alone and have it your way,
I'm sick of lies and of you,
Because all you will do, is leave me blue.....

Away in my broken heart..

Maybe I can see the truth.
Maybe I can search, or find and seek out to recieve.
But the secret for now, will just have to lay within me.
Away in my broken heart..

My broken heart...

Maybe I can see the truth.
Maybe I can search, or find and seek out to recieve.
But the secret for now, will just have to lay within me.
Away in my broken heart..

Heart....

Away in my broken heart.....

Cuzit
05-20-2009, 08:52 AM
Get music and rythm for it.
I love it <3

- Stian+

XX aelita XX
05-20-2009, 10:02 AM
Thanks. I can't compose music though.

Quadtro
05-20-2009, 10:07 AM
It sounds more like a poem to me. I'd have to wait and see it in music though.

XX aelita XX
05-21-2009, 02:09 AM
Imagine the music.