Trapped- A poem

[Mutilate]

My soul is trapped in a dark empty pit,
I try to do good but i just can't help it.
Its so strange why i'm blinded but can see.
I'm trapped in this hole forever.

Saints, angels, and priests say the same,
They say that the devil is the one to blame.
Why can't it be me getting all the attention.
I'm trapped all alone forever.

I'm blocked out by fear and I'm desparate,
My body and mind are soon to be late.
Just end it now, i can take it no longer.
I'm trapped in this box forever.

[Apathy]

7/10.
I like the idea of the poem, but there were a few errors.
You misspelled a few words.
Missing punctuation.
I really like your style of poetry, but try, and add punctuation in every sentence, because without it, the poem loses it's balance.
Good job.:yes:

[Mutilate]

I fixed my punctuation. Re-read it. And im glad u love me =p