Fear

[Vishaan]

A short piece from my at home collection.

My arms are wrapped around you,
Squeezing in delight.
My mind utterly surrounds you,
Gasping from your might.
I miss you now,
Even though you are here.
I wipe the fear from your brow.
I hold you close,
As you draw near,
And wipe away all of your tears.

[Mutilate]

Just curious about the Rhyming pattern

The pattern seamed like this at first

A
B
A
B
C
D
C
E
F
F

That just seams extremely off, but i liked the content of the poem.
Just work on the rhyme a little bit.

[Vishaan]

There is literally no rhyming scheme. Its just meant to be read.

Straight from the heart my friend, no fake fronts.

[Mutilate]

Then it wasn't that good. No fake fonts