My Shooting Star

[Marisa]

Sweet kisses along my shaking lips.
The warm taste of you on my tongue.
People, they tell us, we can't be in love.
We just don't understand for we're young.

Yet I know that this, my beating heart,
Belongs to no one but you.
And the things whispered in our ears,
Every word we know is true.

Though we may be just adolescents,
Who have seen and felt so little thus far.
You will never see me ever deny,
That only you are my shooting star.

[Mutilate]

I don't know how you do it! No joke, i can't do the romantic touchy fealy crap.
Give these to your girlfriend (or boyfriend, no homo lmao) or give em to your crush. You'll get a date with what you write, NO JOKE!

And your loving my sig lol

[Marisa]

I don't know how you do it! No joke, i can't do the romantic touchy fealy crap.
Give these to your girlfriend (or boyfriend, no homo lmao) or give em to your crush. You'll get a date with what you write, NO JOKE!

And your loving my sig lol

Ok, obviously you don't realize that I'm a girl because I would give these to a guy, my boyfriend specifically, and it wouldn't be homo. (Obviously.) He already knows I'm a writer and he's read stuff that I've written before. Been together for almost 5 months, so..yeah.

And actually, no, I don't love your sig.

[Johno]

You did it again Marisa, I love your work. It contains amazing flow and intense emotion, pretty good all around, keep up the work, It's good to see Literary Artists been active :).

[Marisa]

Thanks for the comments, Sound Wave. Idk, I pretty much write when I'm inspired and then post it on here. I'm just the crazy one that writes a lot. :P

[ZoneWins]

Not to bring you down or anything but it seems a little cliché.

[Marisa]

Not to bring you down or anything but it seems a little cliché.

My stuff tends to be now and then. It's just how I write. Thanks though. (Don't worry, I take any comments good or bad. :D )

[Berkly Skilz]

Woah I'm stunned, great poem.

[Fvgbak]

Nice double post marisa :o.

On topic: You've got real good writing talent derrrr.

[Marisa]

Nice double post marisa :o.

On topic: You've got real good writing talent derrrr.

A post got deleted obviously. (See how I quoted someone? But that quote is gone now?)

Thanks you guys. :)

[Redsax2092]

I don't know how you do it! No joke, i can't do the romantic touchy fealy crap.
Give these to your girlfriend (or boyfriend, no homo lmao) or give em to your crush. You'll get a date with what you write, NO JOKE!

And your loving my sig lol

dude i'm her boyfriend lmao XD