Colin
07-15-2009, 12:08 AM
Comeliness flows from you like sparkling shimmers of glistening stars in the night sky,
your beauty radiantly shimmers through the darkest of nights.
Adoring are your eyes as they look back into mine,
I can not escape, must not escape, how long must this yearning endure?
Enamored I am within the walls of your love,
My amorousness for you thrives bright with endless tides of devotion.
Flourish with me and calm my passion my discomposure,
Only then will my doors open unto you, my shining angel.
I can feel your aura, daunting with each new step,
Your sweet love and compassion, your infatuation, your emotion.
No clue how long this took, maybe 10-15 minutes tops. My Literary of the Week entry so critique as you must.
your beauty radiantly shimmers through the darkest of nights.
Adoring are your eyes as they look back into mine,
I can not escape, must not escape, how long must this yearning endure?
Enamored I am within the walls of your love,
My amorousness for you thrives bright with endless tides of devotion.
Flourish with me and calm my passion my discomposure,
Only then will my doors open unto you, my shining angel.
I can feel your aura, daunting with each new step,
Your sweet love and compassion, your infatuation, your emotion.
No clue how long this took, maybe 10-15 minutes tops. My Literary of the Week entry so critique as you must.