The Way It Was

[Vishaan]

These are the lyrics to an acoustic song I wrote. Chances are, if you think the stanza isn't long enough, it was meant to be held in voice.

I want to let you know,
The way you make me feel.
I want to hold you close,
And bear your pain.

I love the way you laugh,
The simple way you smile.
The way you touch my skin,
And heal my sins.

I wanted you to hear,
The way I feel inside.
I want to hold you close,
And bear you pain.

I hate it when you leave,
You walked out from my life,
The way you ripped my skin,
And stole my heart.

[Configure]

The words you chosen fit well into the song, it has great meaning and it's easy to understand the meaning of the song.

These Lyrics will stick in my head.

[Vishaan]

The words you chosen fit well into the song, it has great meaning and it's easy to understand the meaning of the song.

These Lyrics will stick in my head.

Thanks. Alot.

Your the first person to actually read my stuff as a song.

I'm a guitarist, and most of my material is written when I am playing.

Thank you.

[Stecki]

What is meant be the line bear you bear ?

~stecki

[Configure]

Thanks. Alot.

Your the first person to actually read my stuff as a song.

I'm a guitarist, and most of my material is written when I am playing.

Thank you.

Your welcome, i used to write music myself, but i havn't been doing it as much recently.

[Vishaan]

What is meant be the line ?

~stecki

Edited it. It was supposed to be bear you pain. haha

[Chris]

And bear you pain.

Shouldn't it be:

And bear your pain.?

That's the only mistake I could find. Other than that, it's great! Amazing work, Ego. I'm hoping to see a lot more songs from you ;).