A Prostitutes Poem

[smexy mage]

My body, used and thrown away,
I do this to recieve a little pay.
Without my pimp, I would be dead,
I can barely afford a loaf of bread.
Day and night, I am used,
Day and night, I am abused.
I run with the evening gail,
even though, my attempts always fail.
I cannot escape my evil past,
I run away, while my energy lasts.



~Caleb


P.S. If there are any errors please make notice of them so i may fix them.

[Sirnoob]

Sorry, but once again I do not like this poem at all. Its just so cheezy and simple.

[killamarks]

Sorry, but once again I do not like this poem at all. Its just so cheezy and simple like a dr sues poem.

Please, SHUT UP. Go do some pixels fails.

Smexy, I love it. :)

[n z]

it was alright i guess.... not the peticular subject i would choose but its alright

[David]

Please, SHUT UP. Go do some pixels fails.

Smexy, I love it. :)

Oh yeah, he's a pixel fail when hes a pixel of the month winner. Fgt.

Tbh your poems are becoming rather cheesy.

[killamarks]

Oh yeah, he's a pixel fail when hes a pixel of the month winner. Fgt.

Fgt whos pixel winner of month before?

[kuzmin]

Nice rhyming + it's funny.

[David]

But hes still a pixel battle winner, am I right?
Idiot.

[n z]

Fgt whos pixel winner of month before?

If im not correct, you were disqualified from pixel battle 2 for ripping and the picture had nothing to do with your favourite runescape skill(which was the theme)? sorry if im wrong.

[killamarks]

If im not correct, you were disqualified from pixel battle 2 for ripping and the picture had nothing to do with your favourite runescape skill(which was the theme)? sorry if im wrong.

You're wrong.

[smexy mage]

Thanks idc about you haters. Kuzmin and Killamarks just got on my destroy the world but not these peeps list. ;)




~Caleb

[David]

Even better, he won a pixel battle before you even did.

I regret you winning PB5 tbh, cause you've began to think your some badass e-punk.

[smexy mage]

You will soon be stripped of your rank I am contacting someone as we speak.




~Caleb

[killamarks]

Even better, he won a pixel battle before you even did.

I regret you winning PB5 tbh, cause you've began to think your some badass e-punk.

Can you explain me the Link with his poem and this. Also he 'won' before me or such, Idc? My entry was better than his in PB5. I didnt entered other because no, I can't afford spending my life on pixel signature, prefer getting hanging out.

Now please, if you have a minimum of respect to this website, stop this flame.

[David]

Lul Caleb, this has nothing to do with my rank. My rank brings me no power, BUT this does have something to do with idiots who think they're something they're not. So do what you please.

[smexy mage]

LOLOL darn, seems ive been here longer than you. I think i can get someone demoted, i have way more friends than you.




~Caleb

[Jesse]

You will soon be stripped of your rank I am contacting someone as we speak.




~Caleb

stfu.

If you're going to argue graphics, do it in that section.

Your poem lacks value, pick a new subject and make sure you write it well.

[David]

LOLOL darn, seems ive been here longer than you. I think i can get someone demoted, i have way more friends than you.




~Caleb

Oh yeah, because your join date is Jan 2009, and mine is 2008. And then ever better, seeing as I've been here since Uber 1.0(On previous accounts), been a mod 9 times, OMM, Oldschool your WAY MORE POPULAR!!

Your a ****in retard, you think you know it all when reality is you know NOTHING. So do us all a favour and just GTFO.

[Zaveski]

People who have been here longer, and say they are cooler for being here longer, are not cool at all.

Seriously, David, your main goal in Dodian is to prove to people that you are from Uber 1.0, and have been mod nine times? (Which kind of means you screwed up nine times) Everyone pretty much gets the point, and in reality, everyone including Benz, Stealth, Drags, etc. are really no better than anyone like they say they are. This is the internet, we don't know who the hell eachother is. Pretty much this forum has turned into a huge bumfight.

[Slay]

People who have been here longer, and say they are cooler for being here longer, are not cool at all.

Seriously, David, your main goal in Dodian is to prove to people that you are from Uber 1.0, and have been mod nine times? (Which kind of means you screwed up nine times) Everyone pretty much gets the point, and in reality, everyone including Benz, Stealth, Drags, etc. are really no better than anyone like they say they are. This is the internet, we don't know who the hell eachother is. Pretty much this forum has turned into a huge bumfight.

Quoted for truth.

[Jesse]

Everyone pretty much gets the point, and in reality, everyone including Benz, Stealth, Drags, etc. are really no better than anyone like they say they are. This is the internet, we don't know who the hell eachother is.


q4t.

When kids start realizing I have no real effect on them I'll be so much happier.

[killamarks]

q4t.

When kids start realizing I have no real effect on them I'll be so much happier.

You had some on me :O :D.

But It's still funny to see you trollin'.

And yeah, Zaven just said something I agree with soo much.!

[David]

I brang that point out, to shut him up. And yes I messed up a few times(Twice if i'm correct, once for language other for duping), others I resigned then worked for it back. Tbh Levi, I dont expect to be better than anyone else, but when someone brings a point up thinking they've been here longer, and what not and they're better than everyone else its fun to point it out and shut them up. Also, my main goal used to be to make Dodian a better place, now its just to have fun and shut people up when needed.

I agree on the part saying "everyone including Benz, Stealth, Drags, etc. are really no better than anyone like they say they are." because overall its 100% true. We're all equally the same. And yes it is the net but as I said, if they want to act all bad over the net why not give them it back and shut them the hell up.

[Sirnoob]

I brang that point out, to shut him up. And yes I messed up a few times(Twice if i'm correct, once for language other for duping), others I resigned then worked for it back. Tbh Levi, I dont expect to be better than anyone else, but when someone brings a point up thinking they've been here longer, and what not and they're better than everyone else its fun to point it out and shut them up. Also, my main goal used to be to make Dodian a better place, now its just to have fun and shut people up when needed.

I agree on the part saying "everyone including Benz, Stealth, Drags, etc. are really no better than anyone like they say they are." because overall its 100% true. We're all equally the same. And yes it is the net but as I said, if they want to act all bad over the net why not give them it back and shut them the hell up.

Q4t You sir, win.