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Vishaan
07-23-2009, 05:56 PM
A shattering wave,
A pulsating sound.
The pain that you gave,
Is shot straight to the ground.
A humbling roar,
A fixating lust.
The hatred I boar,
Is turned into dust.
A sickening disease,
A gut wrenching curse.
Your emotions at ease,
And your fears are terse.
A love struck sight,
An infatuated piece.
My anger will fight,
Though the pain will not cease.
Kreepy
07-23-2009, 06:02 PM
Flow was amazing. Good damn job 9/10 :P
Vishaan
07-23-2009, 06:04 PM
Flow was amazing. Good damn job 9/10 :P
*Blush*
Board was meant to be boar.
I usually don't rhyme that much.
Kreepy
07-23-2009, 06:05 PM
Well you did a good job at it :D
Vishaan
07-23-2009, 06:11 PM
Not really.
I think you lie.
Alot.
Kreepy
07-23-2009, 06:11 PM
I don't lie =\
Mutilate
07-23-2009, 10:48 PM
I don't lie =\
Fail. U just lied
=p
I liked it alot. Flow was great.
9/10
Vishaan
07-23-2009, 10:52 PM
Fail. U just lied
=p
I liked it alot. Flow was great.
9/10
Bahah.
Owned.
Thanks.
Mutilate
07-23-2009, 10:55 PM
And for u noobs who don't know what terse is
Terse is used in this context to be calm,controlled, not worried
You won't find that definition online. Meriam Webster defines terse as Smooth and elegant
Vishaan
07-23-2009, 10:56 PM
And for u noobs who don't know what terse is
Terse is used in this context to be calm,controlled, not worried
You won't find that definition online. Meriam Webster defines terse as Smooth and elegant
Google>Define?
Jesse
07-23-2009, 11:02 PM
Good flow.
About time it was executed properly.
Vishaan
07-23-2009, 11:06 PM
Good flow.
About time it was executed properly.
Wow.
I actually feel accomplished now. Everyone else was just talk.
Thanks Benz..
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