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Vishaan
07-24-2009, 05:43 PM
Childhood abuse is something very near and dear to me. I take it very seriously. and this is just one of many poems about it I have written.

The child she cries,
As the fist bears down.
The father he tries,
To silence the sound.

The room is now quiet,
No longer abrupt.
The pain is a riot,
Like the father corrupt.

The mother is silent,
In the back of the room.
The father grows violent,
In a passion he will loom.

The little girl's eyes,
A passionate sight.
Behind all the lies,
The little girl will fight.

NinjaCat
07-24-2009, 05:48 PM
Nice poem Epi, has good flow to it 9/10 ;).

Ed Skillz
07-24-2009, 05:50 PM
It's so true and I like it. ;)

Vishaan
07-24-2009, 05:52 PM
Nice poem Epi, has good flow to it 9/10 ;).
Thanks. I've been trying to work on that in my last two poems.
It's so true and I like it. ;)

Yeah. I was abused and so was my best friend, Brianne. Kinda tells the story form her eyes.