No name.

[Ed Skillz]

So what do we want, is it fun?
We woun't leave you alone, take your fame and run!
No wait, you better leave it behind
Or else you'll have nowhere to hide.

All we want is to see you undressed
Guess that makes you a bit depressed?
Forget about soul, enjoy your fame
Now you belong to us, don't be ashamed.

Jump in the train of "grace" - as they all do,
Be sure this time he'll hit the wall - as they all do.
It's time to open your mind, not eyes,
Did you realy thought that you`re wise?

Letter, word, phrase, sentence!
Can you create something new that still would make sense?
Everything's been said before
Congratualtions, you're just a lyrical whore.

Tell me, whats the difference between a wise writer and a dirty sinner?
No need for a reason.
Pick up a pen or a gun,
Write a song, or, shoot a guy on the street and run.
You become a "star".
Free drinks at the bar.
It all depends on the musters.

The "stars" are leading the masses in their own direction,
I think the sense of humanity needs a bit of correction.
This world is rapidly changing and so are we, right?
I've had enough, please let me out, because it's getting too tight.

Letter, word, phrase, sentence!
Can you create something new that still would make sence?
Everything's been said before
Congratualtions, you're just a lyrical whore.

And even if there is....
Would we recognize it?

[Mutilate]

Make the first two lines of the last stanza (sentence and sence) Rhyme

I laughed my ass off

[Vishaan]

Bahaha..

I personally don't like the setup, but for the type of poem Its pretty good 7/10


Lyrical whore...Lol

[Ed Skillz]

Bahaha..

I personally don't like the setup, but for the type of poem Its pretty good 7/10


Lyrical whore...Lol

Thank you. ;) This is my best poem ever.

[Chris]

I like this poem. I think there's a sense of conformity throughout this poem. Overall I'd rate it an 8/10 :).

[Ed Skillz]

I like this poem. I think there's a sense of conformity throughout this poem. Overall I'd rate it an 8/10 :).

Thank you. ;)

[Chris]

No problem, Ed. Keep up the poem writing ;).

[Kreepy]

You have a different style among the other people who post. I like it. Your style interests me. Show me what you can do.

[Ed Skillz]

You have a different style among the other people who post. I like it. Your style interests me. Show me what you can do.

I'll do my best. ;)