A little girl.

[Ed Skillz]

A little girl is walking
Trough the desert of the tears.
She’s really lonley and she’s listening
In the beautiful voice she hears.

A little girl is turrning,
There’s someone who she sees.
It’s the angel of surrender
Who’s hanging out right here.

A little girl is telling
Him story of her life.
An angel is just reading
All deems in her mind.

A little girl is crying
Deep inside her soul.
An angel is just trying
To find the meaning of her life.

A little girl is looking
Right ahed to skyline.
An angel of surrender
Just disappears right here.

A little girl is watching
To dust he live behind.

And little girl is walking
Trough the desert of the tears.

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[Kreepy]

Hmm I enjoyed the overall idea of this piece. The flow was off a bit but I know you can do better. Fix up your spelling too. 7/10 for this one. You can do better.

[Ed Skillz]

Hmm I enjoyed the overall idea of this piece. The flow was off a bit but I know you can do better. Fix up your spelling too. 7/10 for this one. You can do better.

Alright thanks.