Dictionary.

[Ed Skillz]

Let's take a look in our dictionary
Yeah, here it is the word I was looking for.
Here it's said - in a state of ***ual virginity - just like little Mary
You know, I was waiting for something more

Now all it shows that the word itself ain't so pure
Just a girl who hasn't seen a ****?
21st century ain't got no cure
Origins lost, somehow makin` me sick


Deformation age
Causing so much rage
Do we know where the road leads?( As we'd care..)
Do we really care about the poor guy who pleads?(Someone else will..)
We're not the one who really decide
We just pick the most likable side.
We have lost our individuality
Wash down things to the purity!

Not giving a **** suits as well
Every **** thrown' to us, we take it for good.
No need to be scared from the Hell
'Cause we're already used to it. - Am I rude?





Rate.

[Mutilate]

It was really good, except for the part where it had absolutely no flow

Syllables are the key!

If line 1 of stanza one has 14 syllabes, then line 1 of stanza two needs to have 14 syllabes as well!

[briese]

For once, I agree with nobartholem. I like the premise, but you could've made it a hell of a lot smoother. Also - this is a poem. The entire english language is at your dispense. Give the piece a little class.

[Jesse]

Also - this is a poem.

No, this is a (piece of c)rap.

[briese]

No, this is a (piece of c)rap.

Oh, this is a rap? Nevermind then; my only criticism is there isn't enough mention of "cash money" and "hoes".