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Kreepy
08-20-2009, 11:41 PM
I find it funny that a person can sum their life up in a few pages of a book. To tell their life in a few pages. If you are resorted to only a few pages you accomplished nothing in life. Change something.

Ugh..Hmm..Ah yes some Literary advice for all the kiddies out there.

-Try using different rhyming techniques.
~Try changing it up after two submissions.

-Here is something that might help you but I STRONGLY urge you not to use it to become a better artist. rhymezone.com. It will help you with your rhyming abilities. I'm pretty sure you can figure out how to use it.

-Write down all the ideas you have in mind. Anything and everything can help you. Simply writing down "Waterfall" can spark something in your mind. I started doing this and it helped me get the idea in my head for my piece "One Shot". I highly recommend that you do so.

Ah I've been wanting to know this for a bit.
What do you guys think about Literary of the week? Waste of time? Keeps your craving of LOTM still warm? Post your thoughts and such.

Personally, regardless that I run it ;), I believe that it's a nice event for the Literary section. Keeps your Literary skills fresh and ready to go for LOTM.

Mutilate
08-21-2009, 01:12 AM
LOTW is keeping me fresh for LOTM.

Now for my random thought

I want to masturbate
Hope my post is not too late.

Kreepy
08-21-2009, 02:16 AM
Good cause I've pondered the idea of stopping it till the section got active again :S

live support
08-21-2009, 02:18 AM
if hannah montana had purple hair...would it change anything?

N I C K
08-21-2009, 02:21 AM
We have hitting drills tonight and I'm extremely nervous for the first time in my life. It's infront of the varsity coach and a ton of people come and watch. What if I mess up? This is going to be a long night.

Kreepy
08-21-2009, 02:23 AM
It's a little thing called weed. Trust me after a few hits you're not going to give a **** if you mess up.

live support
08-21-2009, 02:25 AM
weed is not the answer

Every1die4
08-21-2009, 02:26 AM
weed is not the answer

I agree. Also, I lol'd at Levi's post. :D

Kreepy
08-21-2009, 02:27 AM
Well he is going to be nervous can't change that. Just, I guess, attempt to center your focus to what you're doing and try not to let anything distract you.

SeaJae
08-21-2009, 02:28 AM
I have fingers.

live support
08-21-2009, 02:29 AM
centering your focus is not the answer

Kreepy
08-21-2009, 02:31 AM
Well that is what I offered him to do. If he chooses not to do it that's fine.

Mutilate
08-21-2009, 02:42 AM
OMG, i said the weirdest thing in the world.

I was riding in the car, and the air conditioning was turned up to full blast.
I was trying to listen to music, so I said "Whats up with the 99 air conditioning"

Im so glad my mom didnt hear that. She's be all creaped out.

N I C K
08-21-2009, 05:56 AM
I would like to let everyone know that I did phenomenal tonight. I missed zero tackles and never got ran over and I think had at least 4 really hard hits.

Mutilate
08-21-2009, 06:10 AM
Everyone is very proud of you. I ate alot and gained 200 pounds.

Kreepy
08-21-2009, 10:20 PM
Have you noticed majority of the people on here that have a wider vocabulary are not considered noobs? If you use "ur stuf bee da bomb" or something along those lines, you're a noob. If you don't get your **** together soon people will hate you and it will end in a bunch of immature flaming. Ending, meaning that you will quit. So that is a little hint around here to get noticed. ALSO!!! XD

Random question.

Have you ever when to bed clothed and woke up naked?





Answer that question and post your thoughts about the noob stuff.

Mutilate
08-21-2009, 10:26 PM
I agree with all that noob stuff.

And the answer is yes...

Kind of kreepy. I woke up on my toliet naked....

Kreepy
08-21-2009, 10:30 PM
On the toilet...? **** so hard you faint?

Mutilate
08-21-2009, 10:32 PM
At midnight. Damn mexican food XD

Kreepy
08-21-2009, 10:32 PM
LOL fail.

ROFL

Mutilate
08-21-2009, 10:37 PM
Can we make our own random thoughts too:

Random thought: Click here (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BGvd-C7bw8g)

Kreepy
08-21-2009, 10:39 PM
You can comment with a random thought but nothing too stupid.

Mutilate
08-21-2009, 10:41 PM
The video was too stupid. I fail...even more than falling asleep taking a dump.

I've fallen asleep eating a chicken wing before..

Kreepy
08-23-2009, 12:34 AM
If you are against flaming and your pissed, do you flame? Do you sit back and take the punishment, knowing if you retaliate there will be nothing to gain?

^ Small thought

Okay I'm going to let you guys in on my life a bit..

This is an average now.

4:30am-6:00am: I laid in my bed wide awake from a small nap waiting for my alarm to go off. I thought over my life and events that recently happened. That really set my mood for my day..

6:20am- Out the door from getting ready and I slowly put up my wall to not let anyone notice my feelings. (Helps if you're in the position that I'm in).

7-3pm: school

3pm- Got home played my guitar to lighten my mood.

4pm-6pm: Either went outside or got on my computer. Yeah...

7pm-11pm: Good chance that Ubi pissed me off or I'm in a somewhat good mood.

12am: Attempt to fall asleep around this time. Usually don't.

I'm not giving any details. Don't ask.



Literary Tips. Short List.

-To attempt to get an idea for a poem and such, reflect on what has happened to you recently. That would be the easiest thing for you to get a small idea and work from there.

-Get an normal outline of your poem. Simply write it normally then go over it. ALWAYS go over it.

Mutilate
08-23-2009, 03:08 AM
those poetry tips are pretty obvious, maybe not to amatuers....but people should always review their work...


I wont take punishment if someone is flaming me.
Ill flame them twice as hard. Smart people are always the best flamers.

N I C K
08-23-2009, 04:43 AM
Have you ever woken up next to someone and asked "Who are you?" than realized you spent the night at someone's house who didn't have the party you went to last night and it wasn't the girls house either?

Mutilate
08-23-2009, 05:11 AM
Nope, your just weird...

Kreepy
09-03-2009, 04:08 AM
9~2~09. Wednesday.

I've been extremely depressed lately...Like majority of you care...

Well I have chosen to write stories again. I have an idea in mind and I might post the first chapter in a few days. Don't ask me what is wrong with me, there is a good chance I'm not going to tell you. I only trust a few people on here with stuff like that. This is a mini update. So...Yeah..

Mutilate
09-04-2009, 04:18 AM
Sorry you feal like sht. Hope you get bttr.