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Old 11-03-2009, 11:33 PM   #1
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See me pure or see me covered,
You still think I'm beautiful.
Whether I succeed or whether I fail,
You still think I'm capable of anything.
Eyes filled with joy or filled with tears,
You still can't stop getting lost in them.
Find me strong or find me broken,
You still wrap your arms around me.
I could kiss you or scream at you,
You'll still find a way to love me.
Whether I want to be seen or be hidden,
You still find a way to see me.
I could be desired or rejected,
You're still proud to claim me as yours.
No matter what I do or who I am,
You still love me for me.
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Old 11-03-2009, 11:52 PM   #2
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I love your poems. I think your love ones are the best, i donīt know though. Just the way your write them.. I love it! Great job. Your use of Anaphor is <3. Great job.
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Old 11-04-2009, 12:35 AM   #3
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I love your poems. I think your love ones are the best, i donīt know though. Just the way your write them.. I love it! Great job. Your use of Anaphor is <3. Great job.
Thank you so much. Lol, it seems like anymore my theme is either being lost, or a love poem. It's weird, but that's ok 'cause so am I.
Glad you enjoy them and thanks for the comments.
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Old 11-04-2009, 01:33 AM   #4
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Well, you probably write this good because you relate to your poems. Inspiration is hard to find, and apparently your real life situation is a very great source of inspiration. Keep posting, because sharing is caring.
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