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11-01-2009, 06:33 PM
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The Human Spellchecker 
Join Date: Nov 2008
Location: On the stage
Posts: 1,340
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Why Do You Love Me?
Why do you love me?
This broken misfit
That stands in front of you.
This abused and frightened
Girl that barely knows who she is.
This girl that must seemingly be blind
Because she can’t see the beauty in herself
That you see everyday.
Why do you love me?
I try to find the reason
As you wrap your arms around me.
As your fingers run through my hair,
Down my back, and up again.
As you whisper your dreams in my ear.
As you kiss me with such a passion
That I feel my body shiver with pleasure.
Why do you love me?
You try to explain to me over again,
That I can’t really see myself.
That my mind is corrupted, distorted.
That where I see someone
Worth running away from,
You see someone
Worth running to.
Why do you love me?
I’m not sure I’ll ever really know.
But I’ll search for the answer
In every touch, every whisper.
In every kiss that takes my breath away.
In everything that you do
That leaves me gasping for air
And begging you not to stop.
Why do you love me?
This indecisive girl in front of you.
That loves every inch of you,
That longs for every part of you.
The one who feels selfish
Because I never want to let you go.
Who hopes that you’ll descend upon me now,
And love me in way not even words can describe.
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11-01-2009, 06:45 PM
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Middlewoman
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: dont stalk me georgia
Posts: 1,158
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Because I do
10/10
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11-01-2009, 06:46 PM
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The Human Spellchecker
Join Date: Nov 2008
Location: On the stage
Posts: 1,340
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Aww...how sweet. Too bad I'm not talking about you, babe. .gif "Wink")
Thanks for the rate.
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11-01-2009, 06:59 PM
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Middlewoman
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: dont stalk me georgia
Posts: 1,158
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You're always talking about me woman.. Learn to accept that.
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11-01-2009, 07:01 PM
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The Human Spellchecker
Join Date: Nov 2008
Location: On the stage
Posts: 1,340
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Max
You're always talking about me woman.. Learn to accept that.
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Wow, sorry about that. Guess I forgot. Too many guys to think about in my life. I get them screwed up.
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11-03-2009, 12:14 PM
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King of Posting
Join Date: May 2007
Location: Townsville, Australia
Posts: 1,264
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We all love you 'cos you are Marisa 
10/10, Extrememly well thought out piece of literature. Keep it up Marisa
~James
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^^^ Thanks Qrat ^^^
Proud Dodian Member
1.0 2.0 3.0 4.0
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11-03-2009, 01:46 PM
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The Human Spellchecker
Join Date: Nov 2008
Location: On the stage
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Quote:
Originally Posted by stecki
We all love you 'cos you are Marisa
10/10, Extrememly well thought out piece of literature. Keep it up Marisa
~James |
Aw, thanks Stecki. Always love reading comments from you.
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11-03-2009, 02:40 PM
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The One And Only
Points: 16,390, Level: 30 |
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Burnley, England FTW
Posts: 3,424
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Compelling piece of work, Marisa.
I can give you no higher praise, other than you ought steer your career direction to that of a Poet =)
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English Defence League
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11-03-2009, 11:33 PM
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The Human Spellchecker
Join Date: Nov 2008
Location: On the stage
Posts: 1,340
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Nanoblade
Compelling piece of work, Marisa.
I can give you no higher praise, other than you ought steer your career direction to that of a Poet =)
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As much as I'd love to, that business is too unpredictable. (And I have a fear that I would fail.) So...I'm actually going into telecommunications (tv, radio, etc. I mainly want to do sound.)
Thanks for the comments though.
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