Can someone help me pl0x?

[Yanoos]

Well as you can C I am from the Netherlands. So my English isn't "Amazing" But it have to send my teacher a letter before tomorrow about the film "Taken" Can someone check if my English/Grammer is good in this letter? ( Thanks in advance ) ;


Taken.

The cast ( Only the most important people );


http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0000553/
Liam Neeson
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Bryan Mills
http://www.imdb.com/name/nm1192254/
Maggie Grace
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Kim
http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0650702/
Leland Orser
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Sam
http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0340973/
Jon Gries
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Casey
http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0913175/
David Warshofsky
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Bernie
http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0883480/
Holly Valance
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Sheerah
http://www.imdb.com/name/nm1556320/
Katie Cassidy
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Amanda
http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0075359/
Xander Berkeley
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Stuart
http://pro.imdb.com/widget/resume_redirect/
Olivier Rabourdin
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Jean-Claude
http://pro.imdb.com/widget/resume_redirect/
Gérard Watkins
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St-Clair
http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0000463/
Famke Janssen
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Lenore




Summary;

Bryan Mills is a retired United States government agent. He has a 17 year old daughter Kim, and he is divorced. She lives with her mother, the ex wife of Bryan. One day Kim plans to take a vacation with a close friend The destination is Paris. They are staying in a rented house, but when they share a taxi with a friendly man called Peter. He makes a note of the address he works for a criminal gang from Albania. The next day Kim receives a call from her father. While answering the phone 2 men’s are entering the house and kidnap Kim and Amanda. Bryan gets some information from Kim about the men’s.
Bryan is starting an investigation and reaches Paris to search for his daughter. There he comes to know the kidnappers are Sex-Slavers and he will only have 96 hours to recover his daughter.

My own opinion;
I really enjoyed the film. It’s one of the best I’ve ever seen.
The only thing that was a little bit unrealistic was the part where Bryan kills everyone. He just kills them like they were chickens. The most exciting part in my opinion was in the begin of the film. When 2 men are entering the house and Kim is on the phone. I was really overwhelmed when that happened.
For me it’s like a message; Never trust someone.
The worst part of the movie is on the boat. He just kills everyone so easily except the last guy. That’s a little bit unrealistic.

 

[Chris]

Summary;

Bryan Mills is a retired United States government agent. He has a 17 year old daughter Kim, and he is divorced. She lives with her mother, Bryan's ex-wife. One day Kim plans to take a vacation with a close friend. Their destination is Paris. They rent a house, but when they share a taxi with a friendly man named Peter, he makes a note of the address. He works for a criminal gang from Albania. The next day, Kim receives a call from her father. While answering the phone 2 men enter the house and kidnap Kim and Amanda. Bryan gets some information from Kim about the men.
Bryan starts an investigation and reaches Paris to search for his daughter. Once there, he discovers that the kidnappers are sex-slavers and he will only have 96 hours to recover his daughter.

My own opinion;

I really enjoyed the film. It’s one of the best I’ve ever seen. One thing that was a little bit unrealistic was the part where Bryan kills everyone, he just kills them all with much ease. The most exciting part, in my opinion, was at the beginning of the film when the 2 men enter the house and Kim is on the phone. I was really overwhelmed when that happened.
For me it’s like a message: never trust someone.
The worst part of the movie is on the boat, he kills everyone so easily except the last guy, which I found to be a little bit unrealistic.

 

[Yanoos]

Summary;

Bryan Mills is a retired United States government agent. He has a 17 year old daughter Kim, and he is divorced. She lives with her mother, Bryan's ex-wife. One day Kim plans to take a vacation with a close friend. Their destination is Paris. They rent a house, but when they share a taxi with a friendly man named Peter, he makes a note of the address. He works for a criminal gang from Albania. The next day, Kim receives a call from her father. While answering the phone 2 men enter the house and kidnap Kim and Amanda. Bryan gets some information from Kim about the men.
Bryan starts an investigation and reaches Paris to search for his daughter. Once there, he discovers that the kidnappers are sex-slavers and he will only have 96 hours to recover his daughter.

My own opinion;

I really enjoyed the film. It’s one of the best I’ve ever seen. One thing that was a little bit unrealistic was the part where Bryan kills everyone, he just kills them all with much ease. The most exciting part, in my opinion, was at the beginning of the film when the 2 men enter the house and Kim is on the phone. I was really overwhelmed when that happened.
For me it’s like a message: never trust someone.
The worst part of the movie is on the boat, he kills everyone so easily except the last guy, which I found to be a little bit unrealistic.

Big thanks bro.

 

[Chris]

Big thanks bro.

No prob., I edited some of the obvious mistakes but some parts I didn't really understand.

For example: "sex-slavers", I know what you're getting at but I'm not sure if you mean that they're making Kim + Amanda have sex with them.